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Bruised
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since 2003-07-12
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0 posted 2003-07-13 12:55 PM



"I Won't Let You Fall"

I've fallen again
Can you help me?
Take me for a ride

I'm a little naive
This isn't so clear
I can see the shadows

A little faster
I can feel my heart stop beating
This dizzy feeling

I see the crimson drip
My pale skin
Hit the floor

I can hear a voice
A bright light shines out
I can hear this sound

They've taken my hand
I'm so close
What are they fighting for?

If you knew me
Would you pick me up?
Or would you start taking stabs at me?

I'm a little afraid
I've been hurt before
Yet you're smilling at me

Am I good enough?
Can I make you happy?
Or Would I just mess up?

All those times
With me
I've never felt so safe

Can it always be this way?
Just standing here
For all eternity?

I've seen that stream
Those red eyes
I guess you're a lot like me

All the pain inside
Expelled at this moment
Why should we hide?

I won't let you fall
Yet you're already there
I guess you care

All of a sudden
I hear the most precious sound
Uttered ... I love you

~ Tenshi

"If it's too loud, you're too old!" - A Rock Artist

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-13 01:02 AM


been there, done it...and I'd do it again if I could
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2 posted 2003-07-13 02:20 PM


Very good
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