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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-12 08:14 PM


I've always admired the
strength and not the speed.

And how I howl judgements
so eagerly,
who do I think I am?

I just get so angry,
so frustrated.

I want to peel back
and scream your name into
the parts of me that hate.

I'm so tired
of being ignored by an ever reclusive
spider trying to spin my words around and
give them to me in a form that is not
my own.

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
QjQ
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1 posted 2003-07-12 08:18 PM


good,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


gemjop
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2 posted 2003-07-12 08:22 PM


I've always admired the
strength and not the speed.

And how I howl judgements
so eagerly,
who do I think I am?

loving these words and thoughts. I too admire the strength, speed is lacking sometimes, in thought.

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-07-12 08:25 PM


Meghan, this is a very thought-provoking
poem. I enjoyed reading it.  
Hugs  
Ethel

passing shadows
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4 posted 2003-07-13 01:56 AM


you know I love this one! in the library!
Local Rebel
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5 posted 2003-07-13 12:59 PM


quote:

I'm so tired
of being ignored by an ever reclusive
spider trying to spin my words around and
give them to me in a form that is not
my own.



this talent is truly your own...

Don't tell me to get a life -- I have one on backorder.



[This message has been edited by Local Rebel (07-13-2003 01:02 PM).]

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