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Open Poetry #27

Love's First Kiss

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-12 07:51 PM

What a funny story I heard,
the other day when the book
met the worm.

Three little pigs
marched right off of the page as
if climbing into my world..
Oh, I didn't know what to think when
the hookah smoking caterpillar popped his head in
and gave me a wink!
Dear me,
the ceiling is spinning and I
wonder what world this is ..
What world is this?
Backward, reverse..it
asks the same question as I fall
back
down the
rabbit hole.

And soon as I become a Sherlock to
this mystery..
A wizard turns me into
fish and an evil witch casts her spell
to sleep..
forever untill
loves first kiss.

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

1 posted 2003-07-12 08:22 PM

very nice,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

ecrivan
Member Elite

since 2001-12-10

Posts 3923
my own state

2 posted 2003-07-12 08:39 PM

Alice is that you...hehe...some neat records spun together...enjoyed

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

3 posted 2003-07-12 08:47 PM

Smiling at this...very creative.
I enjoyed this.
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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