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Open Poetry #27

Fresh Blueberries

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2003-07-12 07:04 PM

Fresh Blueberries

In sweet serenade a cello plays
as we partake of the delicacies
offered from lovers plate.
Come morning we awaken in the
arms of serenity, in sweet embrace,
enjoying the touch of each other, as if
in a world possessed of no other lovers.
The first morning words to escape from
her lips so soft and sweet, "My sweet,
I'm starving for a breakfast treat."
I know she's had her fill of me so I
slide from bed, to kitchen, to prepare
my love her favorite breakfast treat.
Fresh blueberries, topped with whip cream
and smothered in hot cream of wheat.
"Anything else you desire, my sweet."?

JamesLee
July12
2003

Kaoru

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since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-12 07:10 PM

Mmm..
great write!

Wind

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since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-07-12 07:11 PM

I really just enjoyed the whole thing. It was so sweet and happy

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

anwaarhassan
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since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

3 posted 2003-07-12 07:36 PM

Well done ! Very intimate and sweet.
Anwaar

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

4 posted 2003-07-12 07:38 PM

Such a soft passion.
Great poem!
Eric

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

5 posted 2003-07-12 07:43 PM

Very nice, James...Enjoyed!
Patricia

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-07-12 11:44 PM

good write,, enjoyed the read...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08

Posts 130
California, USA

7 posted 2003-07-13 12:12 PM

i loved how you described and addressed every sense...sight, touch, taste, smell, and sound...read like a vivid snapshot.

Mike

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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8 posted 2003-07-13 02:00 AM

nice

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