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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia

0 posted 2003-07-12 05:53 PM





The sun rose at the crack of dawn
To signal a brand new day
The earth was bathed in sunshine
Until the clouds moved in to stay

Up above dark clouds were looming
About to give birth to the rain
But there was music in my heart
And it was love I sought to gain

The seagulls looked for shelter
Amongst the clifftops by the sea
And I was nestled in your arms
The perfect place for me to be

We sat and watched the light show
Until finally the sun broke through
And as I looked into your eyes
I fell deeper in love with you

* * *

"When I'm falling in love
no safety net is required"

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

© Copyright 2003 Sue Tancheff - All Rights Reserved
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-07-12 05:54 PM


Sue:

have missed you here indeed!

This is beautiful Goddd
and the safety net?

Good for you
xxoo

Patricia
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since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160
Missouri
2 posted 2003-07-12 07:40 PM


This is beautiful...flow and images.  Great!

Patricia

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-07-12 07:44 PM


Beautiful and lyrical.
Great job!
Eric

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
4 posted 2003-07-12 08:18 PM


beautiful write,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
5 posted 2003-07-12 09:12 PM


Beautiful, Sue. And this is one of my favorite pictures, too. This is so happy.
Sandra

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
6 posted 2003-07-12 09:31 PM


Hi Sue, as always, I loved the romance in your poem.

Trust all is well with you. I miss you and hope we can catch up soon.

Hugs, Marti

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7 posted 2003-07-12 11:01 PM


Sue:  Thanks for sending this to me.  Just a lovely poem!

Betty Lou Hebert

passing shadows
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displaced
8 posted 2003-07-13 02:38 AM


always beautiful

you give me hope

garysgirl
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9 posted 2003-07-13 02:49 AM


We sat and watched the light show
Until finally the sun broke through
And as I looked into your eyes
I fell deeper in love with you


Sue, when I think that I can't fall in love any deeper, it seems I do. But, I love it, too.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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