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Lonely Shadow
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since 2000-03-14
Posts 128
Virginia

0 posted 2003-07-12 05:38 PM


could your beauty be measured
like distance and time
I cannot conceive it to be so
for such beauty could never be
for if your radiance
were measured in distance
then you could touch
the furthest reaches
or if your beauty were time
like the hours of the day
eons would pass and still
not glimpse even a fraction
of what I see before me
those eyes, full of life and love
piercing my heart and soul
all the sadness fading away
feeling only your presence
your smile, so sweet and pure
feeling myself melt inside
your touch so gentle, so soft
like the rains in spring
becoming lost in your soul
through those enchanting eyes
unable to move, unable to breathe
such beauty unsurpassed
my heart hammering as if for dear life
feeling myself draw closer
my eyes closing slowly
so close now, my last vision
of your eyes, your loving smile
your gentle touch
lost in your beauty
please let me stay


Fear destroys the mind, depression destroys the soul... only love and compassion may save you from death.

[This message has been edited by Lonely Shadow (07-12-2003 05:42 PM).]

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Suetang
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since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187
Melbourne, Australia
1 posted 2003-07-12 05:59 PM


Beautiful words of love and devotion.

"Love - bittersweet,
irrepressible -
loosens the limbs
and I tremble"

Take care......Sue

I am in motion
I am blue
Love is an ocean
I'm anchored in you
- Shawn Mullins

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-07-12 07:43 PM


Very powerful.
Eric

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
3 posted 2003-07-13 02:38 PM


Great, powerful write.
Enjoyed

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