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D.Lester Young
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since 2001-12-08
Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-07-15 03:03 AM


In a speck
of time
things can
happen
change
disappear.

In a second
things are
born
die
buildup
destroyed.

A molecule
of mass can
belong to a
rose
thorn
dog
cat
man
woman.

In the tiniest
part can be
the most
important
items of
molecules
seconds
specks
poets.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 07/14/03



© Copyright 2003 David Lester Young - All Rights Reserved
Kaoru
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since 2003-06-07
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where the wild flowers grow
1 posted 2003-07-15 03:09 AM


Always great to read your work.
I love this style,  read it a few times and it just got better and better.
Inspirational write,
enjoyed.

VOE
Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 119
From the land of Camelot
2 posted 2003-07-15 05:35 AM


Tiny, yes, but what would life be without it? Greatly enjoyed this particular read, and gave me some new thoughts on life around me.  Thank you for the ideas!!

I speak from the Voice Of Experience

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
3 posted 2003-07-15 11:45 AM


yeppers..

Enjoyed
Now lets take this back to the top.

Late at night you'll come crawling back
Just to steal a piece of me

"Default"

KoKo
Senior Member
since 2003-02-15
Posts 995
Inside the shadow's shadow
4 posted 2003-07-16 12:10 PM


Loved reading this....again and again and again and.......

I do not know whether I was then a man dreaming I was a butterfly, or whether I am now a butterfly dreaming I am a man.
--Chang Tzu

Tim
Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794

5 posted 2003-07-16 12:11 PM


I concur with the others, enjoyable read.
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