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Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

0 posted 2003-07-12 03:24 PM

A hole in your chest smokes
as you lie in a pool on the ground
red is not your favourite colour
but you wear it well today
of course you knew it would come
you've heard the shots ring out
you've heard the ricochet
but you never thought the bullet
would come through friendly fire

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

1 posted 2003-07-12 03:42 PM

Dark, but good.
Enjoyed.

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

2 posted 2003-07-12 04:22 PM

ouch

I like it when you write dark. It does good for you

This one gave me the shivers, it did.

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-12-2003 04:36 PM).]

Patricia
Member Elite

since 2003-04-06

Posts 2160
Missouri

3 posted 2003-07-12 04:31 PM

Hmmm. This can be taken many ways, Aenimal. So, I will personalize it in my mind...if that's alright with you. You have a great mind!

Patricia

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

4 posted 2003-07-12 05:35 PM

Thanks everybody appreciate the reads and replies

gemjop
Member Elite

since 2002-11-18

Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

5 posted 2003-07-12 08:30 PM

saying much, with so little.

Dylan
New Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 7

6 posted 2003-07-12 09:01 PM

fire right back. or walk away from friendly foes. enjoyed the scene. felt the bullet, well written.

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

7 posted 2003-07-12 09:07 PM

An ugly truth here, written with strength and sadness.
Sandra

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

8 posted 2003-07-12 10:13 PM

thanks everyone just one of those days..

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

9 posted 2003-07-12 10:16 PM

Sighs...I'm gonna be unoriginal and say DAMN!
I'm having one of those days too.

Melissa~

Intellectually I know that Canada is no better than any other country. Emotionally I KNOW that Canada is the best country in the world!

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

10 posted 2003-07-12 10:25 PM

It is a simple truth of combat; it is a painful complicated truth of life. As always, you mix ideas with great skill. As always, I am taken with the brilliance of your work. Thank you, Sir.

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

11 posted 2003-07-12 10:36 PM

Thanks melissa and yeah..a little too many days like these

No ice thank you sir, you've made my day with such a fine compliment

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

12 posted 2003-07-13 03:17 AM

I understand those days Raph...lots of them had, and yet to come

1slick_lady
Member Ascendant

since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

13 posted 2003-07-13 03:50 AM

ouch...here... i am a bandaid...i'll stick to you...h

Aenimal
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-18

Posts 7350
the ass-end of space

14 posted 2003-07-13 12:35 PM

Thanks Dixie know you do

thanks h..hugs

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