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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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0 posted 2003-07-12 09:30 AM




Ballerina of The Evening Lights

On the lake
of
mists and shimmering lights-
Dances a beauty, she is
the
ballerina of the evening lights.
She pirouettes gracefully
upon her delicate toes,
while breezes
of
wispy lavender chiffon
moves and entices over her
slender young body.
These gentle breezes transport her
onto a concave of
sheer mists
that are filled with vibrant energy.
Her loving finger tips touching the wind,
as he gently kisses her
creamy perfumed skin.
With loving tenderness he lifts her
from the swirling mist-
For she is a goddess, she is
the
ballerina of the evening lights.
She is the child
of
the Moon and of the North Star.
These are a few
of
the wondrous gifts
they’ve bestowed upon
their elusive mystical child.
The glow, from her father,
the Moon,
shining within her beautiful green eyes.
The gentility and sparkle,
a gift from her mother,
the North Star.
As she spins across these waters of beauty,
she sprinkles the
diamonds of stardust
and
the glittering snow of moonbeams.
She casts a celestial silhouette in the constellation
of imagination.
For she is the child
of
the Moon and of the North Star.
She is the
Ballerina of The Evening Lights.

Bonnie J.

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1 posted 2003-07-12 09:38 AM


wow...there is no other word, wow,

riley

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QjQ
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2 posted 2003-07-12 11:45 PM


very nice  bon bon  i enjoyed this,,,

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more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08
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3 posted 2003-07-13 12:11 PM


For she is the child
of
the Moon and of the North Star.
She is the
Ballerina of The Evening Lights.

____

loved that line...the imagery is amazing...very nicely done

Mike

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