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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-12 08:40 AM



Let me pick your eye
apart
why see it this way?

forget me so kinky
i'm laying straight

missing the face I can't forget

It shouldn't be this
leftover dinner
keep it mother
I don't need it anymore

lost the leaving
missing feeling like I'm here

set on forgetting you
fingers face the dial

don't call

wait

wait.

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Riley
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1 posted 2003-07-12 09:35 AM


i really really liked this. it was just great, i enjoyed it.

ri

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

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2 posted 2003-07-12 09:39 AM


hey Gem, I mustve missed you again. I know who this is about, so don't even THINK of picking up the phone. Ok, enough words from the peanut gallery, I loved your poem. I'm off to find your other ones, If you have any

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

gemjop
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3 posted 2003-07-12 10:02 AM


thanks riley, very much.

Liz. yes mum, i know i shouldnt, and dont want to either really. its his call, not mine. he he. na, i just want an end to this madness, and i lie in bed thinking of giving in, just for some peace of mind.

thanks for ya constant support m friend. if i look like i'm getting too soft on him, knock me out

love ya windy!

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4 posted 2003-07-12 10:08 AM


when did you stop in? when I was sharing my sarcasm with the people in poetry challenge? lol, you should read the thread, it's hillarious. Haven't you written anything new? I need more deppressed Gem madness

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

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5 posted 2003-07-12 10:15 AM


Hi Gemma,  
I've missed you the last couple of days. I've just run in for a little while and had to leave....company is here.  

Little lady, you do what your heart tells you is right. Okay? That is what will be the best...but you know that, don't you?

Remember, we're just an e-mail away if you need us.  

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~  Heart hugs, Ethel

gemjop
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6 posted 2003-07-12 10:30 AM


I'll go look, i was reading and adding to the thread about your list of things on your desk. grrrr cats and their tails, cause havok dont they?i end up screeeeaming at mine whe he tries to sit on me, its always when youre really trying to do something.

Ethel Mae...i know, youre right, but i'm sitting this one out. I wondered why you havent been here. i dont like it when youre not. but have fun with your visitors. speak to ya soon. xxxx

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7 posted 2003-07-12 11:07 AM


You may realize, after all is said and done,
   the Madness is not in the "want"
   but in the "having" ...

            ... just laying straight.


    Life's adventures ARE only a dream ahead.

                    Be strong of heart,
                       and sound of soul.

                      *S    oxox

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-07-12 01:15 PM


very cool gemma, I always love reading you....very cool write
Kaoru
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9 posted 2003-07-12 01:16 PM


Cool write, I liked the first line..
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