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Me and my Shadow
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Me and my Shadow |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Me and my Shadow I see my shadow t’was born with me A spore that caught reality A vessel launched that cuts a wake That steers a course make no mistake. Through the dark of night and gale This ship will cut a wake and sail Out of sight of land it seems With a compliment of dreams This is the course of common core Some with less and some with more A blow upon the sand dooms rhyme Brought by the hand of changing time Beware the curse of diadem With treasured gold and colored gem They are but shackles of the mind Quick sand on the path of find Each ship will stop and renew Such is the lean and change of brew. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful morning read here Sy! And, I'n popping it into my library to read once again when my eyes are fully open!  A good cup of hot tea is what we need... I'll pour. ~Tea & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Thank you dear, you pour I'll drink.  |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Seymour...A wonderful tale you tell, enjoyed reading you this morning...Paul "To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you" |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
'morning Seymour. It's good to see you today. I enjoyed seeing your shadow in your rhymes today, too. I hope that you have a good one.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
 the ply and play of words unveiled...'tis a stormy sea you've sailed! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I see my shadow t’was born with me A spore that caught reality A vessel launched that cuts a wake That steers a course make no mistake. Through the dark of night and gale This ship will cut a wake and sail Out of sight of land it seems With a compliment of dreams This is the course of common core Some with less and some with more A blow upon the sand dooms rhyme Brought by the hand of changing time ================================= I would follow you and your shadow anywhere Beware the curse of diadem With treasured gold and colored gem They are but shackles of the mind Quick sand on the path of find Could that verse be any cooler??????? Quick sand on the path of find you are tooooo cooool for school  *ww*  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
these are for the one I missed yesterday... took a little road trip to the river. the moth is sunburned LOL |
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anwaarhassan Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181Menifee, CA |
Your mastery with the rhyme is exquisite. Enjoyed this poem very much... Anwaar. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Paul, Thank you, glad you enjoyed. Ethel Cloudy today, don't think I'll see my shadow. LOL Sunshine You have taken the storm away, Hugs. JM, Missed you yesterday but you made up for it today. WWRS Anwaar. You are to kind, thank you. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good morning, Mr. T.! "Beware the curse of diadem With treasured gold and colored gem They are but shackles of the mind Quick sand on the path of find" ~ Did I ever tell you how fine a writer I think you are?  EA |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
at first I thought of Peggy Lee...me and mom loved that song...(could I say that without telling my age?) great write as always a classic Seymour style! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Enjoyed your poem and remembered when we played as children trying to catch the shadow .... embracing it by laying down was the only way to "grasp" it. Love, have a beautiful week-end.... hopefully you may see your shadow!!! Margherita |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Earth Angel MANY TIMES IN MANY WAYS. Thank you passing, Thank you dear. Margherita A little cloudy today but I'm sure I will. |
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