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Skyfire
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0 posted 2003-07-12 07:10 AM



You once were my life
You still are; always will be
Even though you're gone

[This message has been edited by Skyfire (07-12-2003 07:11 AM).]

© Copyright 2003 Rhonda Adolph - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 2003-07-12 07:16 AM



Gone...not forgotten
Living on within your heart
Memories remain


"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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2 posted 2003-07-12 07:28 AM


I tend to have thoughts like this in my dreams...wait a minute, in the middle of the night...yeah, thats right...James
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3 posted 2003-07-12 10:21 AM


Rhonda, this is a really good senryu...though
it is sad. I love to write these, don't you?
Hugs  
Ethel

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4 posted 2003-07-12 10:31 AM


hey sf, I feel like this sometimes. Serenu or however it's spelled? lol, good write girl

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

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5 posted 2003-07-12 10:50 AM


Skyfire
Good one, enjoyed.

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6 posted 2003-07-12 01:23 PM


beautiful
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7 posted 2003-07-13 05:13 PM


*BUGS*
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