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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-07-12 02:42 AM





This poem does not hold all
the words to say i'm sorry

a single rose i'm sending
for not enough has bloomed
for each time i've hurt you

yes years with tears and
fears i gave you

will haunt me always

as time passes ~ pain will
ease with new places and
faces

with regrets i have forsaken



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-12 02:52 AM


you're not so bad
timothysangel1973
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2 posted 2003-07-12 03:10 AM


Wonderful heartfelt write QjQ!
Bonnie j
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3 posted 2003-07-12 09:40 AM


Sounding like a heartfelt poem of sadness.
See Ya Bon

Riley
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4 posted 2003-07-12 09:41 AM


wow, i loved the whole concept of it, forgive me i am just a babbling teen. but this is wonderful...


riley

*the bloody tide comes in on the shore, time after time*

JilGirl
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5 posted 2003-07-12 03:23 PM


Heartfelt write of self
awareness and strength in
acknowledgement of past
regrets!

LOVED it!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

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6 posted 2003-07-12 04:07 PM


as time passes ~ pain will
ease with new places and
faces


Yes indeed

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-07-12 04:44 PM


Regrets...yes I have regrets...they will always be with me...James
Patricia
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8 posted 2003-07-12 04:50 PM


Enough words?  Hmmm I think just the right mix of words and flow, Q.  One of you best, my friend.  Glad I called on you today!


Patricia

vlraynes
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9 posted 2003-07-12 08:19 PM



Beautiful words from the heart...wonderfully done.
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-07-12 08:31 PM


Glenn, this is beautifully said....
very heart-felt.  
Hugs  
Ethel

ThisDiamond
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11 posted 2003-07-12 08:34 PM


Glenn,
There is not a braver heart, than that which identifies it's own sorrows.
So very well written. TD

Dylan
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12 posted 2003-07-12 09:04 PM


ouch. felt this in my gut. very nicely written.
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