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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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down I hold the finger taut against the strings of my distraught cymbals in a distant light zing toward my eye--too bright awkward elbows edging us holding strings across the bar this is just a small litmus testing of the we in US... absolution of the sum see the sun of me in you I see I speak divinity and find we US in silences saying all the things of must as we buy defiances... Rock with me? as I move toward oasis in monsoon of a desert in a storm blowing wind in day of borne as I am I am as hatch-- revealing feathers in the thatch crosshair grasses braided thrice... tell me I just might believe whisper and I'll hold you tight tell me hold me through the grieve and everything won't be alright and nothing is the same again in this honesty. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
as I am I am as hatch-- revealing feathers in the thatch ~*~ revealing more... revealing life |
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Logan Senior Member
since 2001-05-28
Posts 1641Arkansas |
Ahh, gentle one. Your words flow like the finest of wine, and as such, leave a pleasing taste to the palate...very gentle smile |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
A sparkling champagne of finely aged lament. TD |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
serenity blaze - stunning write from you pen... BC |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
serenity "hold me through the grieve and everything won't be alright and nothing is the same again in this honesty."  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I wanted to say thanks to you all for reading. This was one that ached just writing it, so know that you have my heartfelt gratitude.  Thank you for reading and for letting me KNOW that you did. It's very much appreciated. Love and hugs. |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
four bar blues on blue blaze.... resonance reverb mixolidian riff |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Good God - the last lines K humbled truly . . . xxoo |
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