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Blush
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0 posted 2003-07-11 04:15 PM




I awake...
To the ticking of the clock
The gentle falling rain
I feel the pounding of your heart
The warmth of your arms,
I taste the hunger of your morning
Kisses...
The salty tang of loving
on your skin
Light nudges sleepily thru the lace curtains
Dawn,
Soon
You will be gone~

[This message has been edited by Balladeer (07-13-2003 12:38 AM).]

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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2003-07-11 04:20 PM


"Dream lover where are you."
Nice expression...James

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-07-11 04:58 PM


Great write
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-07-11 05:02 PM


Lovely...just lovely.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
4 posted 2003-07-11 06:20 PM


I like this theme. Well done.
Sandra

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My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2003-07-12 01:14 AM


Gotta agree with everyone else =o)

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
6 posted 2003-07-12 01:19 AM


Blush - mornings come, mornings go, but oh the inbetween...

BC

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state of mind
7 posted 2003-07-12 05:04 PM


nice write

bernie

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Balladeer
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8 posted 2003-07-13 12:39 PM


beautiful!!
LeeJ
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9 posted 2003-07-15 03:42 PM


simply stunning very much enjoyed.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
10 posted 2003-07-15 03:54 PM


Yes, Blush...this is quite lovely!
garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-07-15 04:10 PM


Blush, this is really pretty.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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