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chills raced and eyes searched |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA 
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Sounds crashed but weren’t heard Lights flashed and weren’t seen Wind howled and I never felt Hearts danced and souls pranced Minds reached for knowing Is the wind blowing Clouds quieted the night Softly a dream whispered Thoughts tumbled and feelings swept us away Interlaced wisps of love washed over and over Tiny chills raced through hearts and souls Eyes searched and found shadows That had danced and pranced Fingers touched and hands caressed The sun watched as love was born The newborn smiled at the light |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Wonderful Paul!! I love this! hugs, Chris "The years have seen my life through someone else's eyes....but now, |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
how pretty!!! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I can feel the whirl of excitement in this, Paul, like an emotional whirlwind.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Wonderful Paul! Fantastic imagery! ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A vibrant and captivating write!  EA |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goodknight - well written verse, many thoughts... BC |
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Wind
since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981 |
I've never seen you here before. This was a great poem  If art is still inside, I feel it |
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