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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-07-11 10:25 AM


Fears, unleashed
Upon
This world of pain

Surrounded by
Troubled minds
Calling out
To someone close

“Help me!”
The words echoing
Into distance troubles

Darkness closes in
Trapped
In there own little worlds

Souls drift away
Not needed
Empty shells remain
Littering the floors
Lifeless

The souls
Drift onwards
To the heavens
Waiting
For their shells
To awaken
From troubled minds

The shells lay
Motionless
Lost
Searching for
A way to escape

Wondering through
There worlds inside
Watching the questions
Come to life
And answers jumping
Into their minds

Finally all is clear
The minds awake
With questions answered
Souls return once more

Flowing through the veins
Leaking life
Back into
Lifeless bodies

Bringing back to life
The heart
With a touch of flame
On it’s burnt out candle

The heart burns fiercely
And warmth
Floods the body once more

The souls been the life-force
That brings
The motionless bodies
To Life

And the Lifeless bodies
Become
The carries of souls
To the end
Of there decaying lifes


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Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2003-07-11 10:29 AM


So that is how it works! Thank you for enlightening me!

A very intriguing and interesting write! There's a ponderer behind that handsome face!


EA

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where the wild flowers grow
2 posted 2003-07-11 10:31 AM


Ditto, to Angel. Great write, enjoyed!
LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

3 posted 2003-07-11 01:52 PM


And the Lifeless bodies
Become
The carries of souls
To the end
Of there decaying lifes

Wonderful!

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