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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-11 10:20 AM


The   star
   I've wished
         upon for
15   years.
Now an
   explosion in
the sky.

    Must I

remind myself
not  to      kiss for the bliss.

Glow
   my sky,
       burn
my      wish.

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1 posted 2003-07-11 10:22 AM


I love the style of your words. I'm having trouble thinking of things to say. I'd say more..but you know

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

LeeJ
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2 posted 2003-07-11 01:44 PM


beautiful
Kahlil
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3 posted 2003-07-11 02:01 PM


Kaoru:  the explosion in the sky could become stardust over your ocean....
Earth Angel
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4 posted 2003-07-11 02:25 PM


I would love to echo Kahlil's reply!


EA

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