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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587
Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-07-11 07:54 AM



The same heady feel
without having
you mine

I can cast smiles no shadow
knowing i got away

tap toe beat to
all i have lost

I have the complete set
wisdom wise from hearts of friends

connect four
another penny has dropped

guitars grit
still sounds the same

everybody had a year
flavoured mine chance giver

too tough to chew
bitter dig among bone

addiction grasped the handle
locked you out in the warm

sweating fools, you and I
over something always half fixed

nothing could heal
the perforated edge

grow up slow some say

to that, oh you listen.


[This message has been edited by gemjop (07-11-2003 11:53 AM).]

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Wind
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since 2002-10-12
Posts 2981

1 posted 2003-07-11 09:43 AM


yeah..everything's allright but our brains gumdrop. I really liked this one. It is in my library (well by the time YOU read this it will be)

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-11 09:47 AM


"grow up slow they say"---That would be rather difficult for someone who has such an advanced mind and intellect!


EA

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178

3 posted 2003-07-11 11:21 AM


There is always so mucg depths to your words...it keeps me digging.
Eric

inkedgoddess
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since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392
Ohio
4 posted 2003-07-11 11:25 AM


its a game of chance with every new joker that comes along
some take longer to wipe off than others, i guess

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
5 posted 2003-07-11 08:11 PM


gem?

sweating fools, you and I
over something always half fixed

nothing could heal
the perforated edge

yes . .  i know
xxoo

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