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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-07-11 07:48 AM


Transference

Within the shadows of a goal
Lies the doorway to the soul
Beyond the seven veils of view
Rests the key to its undo

Somewhere in the sift of rhyme
Lays its essence and its time
Within the winding of your sail
Will the passage come to bale

There is no tender way to find
The occult spirit of your mind
It lies within eternity
For that’s how long forever be.

Within the spinning of the wheel
Passing on from real to real
Lies the strange of ever change
And the ever of its range

And if, I clad another veil
Just add it to your top most sail.



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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-07-11 07:57 AM


and a very good friday morning to you;
you soar and sail with the spirit of a bird in flight over the ocean blue

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-07-11 08:09 AM


inkedgoddess
Good morning and thank you.

scorpio
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3 posted 2003-07-11 08:39 AM


Sy, I hope you only need a light air sail..

believe in what your heart feels...

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-07-11 08:48 AM


scorpio
Can't say for sure. LOL

Enchantress
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5 posted 2003-07-11 08:56 AM


What an uplifting morning write Sy!
Such a wonderful way to start my day!
Have a great weekend love.
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-07-11 09:04 AM


Nancy,
Thank you dear be right there for tea.

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7 posted 2003-07-11 10:06 AM


Good morning dear Seymour. Yet another wonderful write to ponder and savour.
I won't be here for a few days as I am leaving on a short jaunt with my hubby to-morrow. I am sure that your morning snacks with tea will be taken care of !! As for to-day...I have a silver platter of sweet treats for thee! Have a great weekend and I shall return hugs, Chris  


[This message has been edited by Nightshade (07-11-2003 10:09 AM).]

Earth Angel
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8 posted 2003-07-11 10:12 AM


!!! !!! !!!

You've done it again, Mr. T.!

I'd have to quote the whole poem to show you all the lines I loved!!!

I hope that you can bring Randy with you the next time around!

Luvsya both!
EA

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-07-11 10:17 AM


Earth Angel
Randy is coming up soon, Loveya.

anwaarhassan
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10 posted 2003-07-11 10:59 AM


Beautiful write...Your rhyming has a certain melody to it...very impressive.

Anwaar.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-07-11 01:13 PM


Anwaar,
Thank you for the read and reply.

vlraynes
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12 posted 2003-07-18 03:49 AM



Sy...once again, your rhymes have woven a smile onto my face.

Love this, my friend.

"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

JaiOfHeaven
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13 posted 2003-07-18 03:59 AM


Smooth collection of rhyme.
Liked it alot.
Whenever you get this..
checkout my post "Jo"
I experimented a lil on it.

Jai

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-07-18 07:25 AM


vlraynes
It's always a pleasure to have you comment.
Thank you dear,

Jai
Thank you for the read and I will.

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