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mirror man
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0 posted 2003-07-11 12:41 PM



All intent extolled the colony
loud the sound hears, well found
the instruments all round
proclaimed by drum and sung.
The voices separate, one,
merit to secondary.
Inviolate, firm to sum.

Compelled to justice, aura made
by hand, allegiance won
nor commonwealth, nor dream,
all pilgrim in color violet
dun.


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ecrivan
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my own state
1 posted 2003-07-11 12:48 PM


will have to come back for another read...it sounds intriguing though, and good to read you again


Kahlil
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2 posted 2003-07-11 01:49 AM


"all pilgrim in color violet"

spiritual certainty  ~K~

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