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icebox
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0 posted 2003-07-11 12:21 PM




Caramel center

Wrapped in vanilla velvet

Dreaming of love's bite

©2003 by icebox

© Copyright 2003 icebox - All Rights Reserved
timothysangel1973
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1 posted 2003-07-11 12:32 PM


Well Ice...it's 12:30 here in SC, and I have kids in the bed, and husband working the graveyard shift...and that poem made me crave a candy bar!!!!

Wonderful, delicious thought!

Tima

icebox
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2 posted 2003-07-11 12:35 PM


Your comment made me laugh.  Thank you!
Midnitesun
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3 posted 2003-07-11 12:39 PM


LOL, I sure wasn't thinking about candy bars.
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4 posted 2003-07-11 12:40 PM


icebox...sounds like the awakening of a young girl.  Lovely!
Honeybunch
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5 posted 2003-07-11 12:46 PM


Icebox - Love's bite is so much part of life and I wonder why it has to be so bitter/sweet sometimes.
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6 posted 2003-07-11 02:06 AM


ooooo, no sweeter craving...
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-07-11 08:05 PM


Beautiful icey . . .
lol @ Kacy
xxoo

QjQ
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8 posted 2003-07-11 11:15 PM


very enticing,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


icebox
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9 posted 2003-07-12 10:43 PM


Midnitesun ~ *laugh* You are just a bad girl!  I bet you like walking in moonlight wearing nothing but a long thin flowing dress and feeling the breeze blow the fabric against your skin.

Martie ~ Yes, I am glad it shows.  Thank you.  A quirk of life let me know thousands of young women (simply know them, nothing else) and I have always marveled at some things that are esoterically a woman's sensual experience.

Honeybunch ~ I have been told that if it were not this way, we would never grow from the experience.  Not sure that it's true.

Kahlil ~ *grin* Yes, I have always thought so.  

littlewing ~ It is nice to bring you a small pleasure.

QjQ ~ Glad you enjoyed it, thank you for telling me.

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