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x8x_bigmike
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0 posted 2003-07-10 10:26 PM



A day spent seduced
within wooden walls
the child within
drawn to bird's sweet sax
calling the breeze
filling
faith buckets
with dreams
almost forgotten.

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Poe_Pot_Pie
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1 posted 2003-07-10 10:32 PM


Nice. I like reading short poetry when I don't have the time to sit for ten minutes. Keep writing!
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2 posted 2003-07-10 10:36 PM


A day with nature certainly cleanses the soul and I see you were inspired beautifully.
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