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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2003-07-10 09:50 PM





Crickets chirp in dark
Katydids slip-sing their song
Babies fall asleep





© Copyright 2003 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
ecrivan
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1 posted 2003-07-10 09:52 PM


short and sweet


Snowflake From Hell
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2 posted 2003-07-10 09:53 PM


How is it that the short ones are always the best yet they say so little but say so much at the same time

Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

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3 posted 2003-07-10 09:55 PM


Lovely...like a lullabye.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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4 posted 2003-07-10 10:05 PM


Awww...how sweet Karilea! hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

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5 posted 2003-07-10 10:14 PM


Serene

enjoyed m'friend

Maree.

fate is not just
whose cooking  smells good
but which way the wind blows

(Ani DiFranco)


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6 posted 2003-07-10 10:52 PM


Now that was short. I like it! Calming, relaxing and perfect! keep up the good writing!
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7 posted 2003-07-10 10:56 PM



Well, lookie there...it's a poem for me...and I love it.  
Thank you, my friend, for for the gentle and
calming thoughts...I needed that.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

[This message has been edited by vlraynes (07-10-2003 10:58 PM).]

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8 posted 2003-07-10 11:01 PM


A lovely little gift for our Ms Vicky!

Luvs 'n hugs to you both!
Linda

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9 posted 2003-07-10 11:50 PM


enjoyed the poem, but can we send our crickets up I-35?
Patricia
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10 posted 2003-07-10 11:54 PM


Oh K...this is beautiful.  You work magic with these verses.

Patricia

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11 posted 2003-07-18 03:46 AM



Just because this makes me smile.

"it is better to be a part of beauty
for one instant and then cease to
exist than to exist forever
and never be a part of beauty"
-- Don Marquis

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12 posted 2003-07-18 10:25 AM



Just because I love to see Vicky smile~

Lovely little write, Karilea~

*Huglets*

Psst ... I swiped the graphic~
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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13 posted 2003-07-18 12:25 PM



Crickets chirp in dark
Katydids slip-sing their song
Babies fall asleep

silence now surrounds
white lace curtains filled with moon
baby at my breast

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14 posted 2003-07-18 04:44 PM


Beautiful!
Eric

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15 posted 2003-07-19 11:38 AM


Karilea, what a sweet gift for our Vicky.
Just beautiful.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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16 posted 2003-07-19 10:05 PM


Beautiful Karilea and a lovely sentiment for Vicki
made me smile
much needed
xxoo

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17 posted 2003-07-19 10:14 PM


Shot, sweet, and excellent is the write.
angelblueyes

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