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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-10 09:07 PM


I've got it,
just a clue as you
slip into sleep.
A little thought
for you to keep.

My whispers
weep
your name..

© Copyright 2003 Meghan Armitage - All Rights Reserved
Earth Angel
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1 posted 2003-07-10 09:14 PM


"My whispers weep your name"---great line!

Warm hugs,
EA

anwaarhassan
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2 posted 2003-07-10 09:18 PM


Very nicely said especially the last line.

Anwaar

Saunni
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3 posted 2003-07-10 09:21 PM


Just awesome!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Janette
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4 posted 2003-07-10 11:20 PM


WOW ... that last line was a show stopper.

Gorgious close for a poem.

Enjoyed

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-07-11 02:33 AM


good stuff!
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6 posted 2003-07-11 11:40 AM


good thoughts
Goodknight
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7 posted 2003-07-11 11:43 AM


beautiful poetry - it ends perfectly - Paul
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8 posted 2003-07-11 04:37 PM


Kaoru - deep thoughts written...

BC

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