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Snowflake From Hell
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since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion

0 posted 2003-07-10 08:49 PM


Caught in a loving hold,
My heart is yours, sold.
Heaven sent need more,
I'm sure I'm yours.
With you by my side,
Nothing I need hide.
Mistifyed by your charms,
Longing for you in my arms.
Your company I miss very much,
Waiting patiently for your touch.
Enchanted by your gorgeous looks,
Can't find it in any fantasy books.
Glorified by your uniqueness,
Becoming my biggest weakness.
Heaven sent need more,
I know...
I'm yours.


Another dream that will never come true just to compliment your sorrow.....Disturbed

© Copyright 2003 Kyle - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...
1 posted 2003-07-10 08:52 PM



Snowflake...this is lovely.
What a beautiful entry into the forums.
Welcome to Passions!
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
2 posted 2003-07-10 08:55 PM


Thank ya =oÞ
Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
3 posted 2003-07-10 08:56 PM


Welcome to Passions! Enjoyed your enchanting poem!

Warm, welcoming hugs,
Earth Angel

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-07-10 08:58 PM


WELCOME TO PASSIONS!
Of course I enjoyed your enchanting first post!
I look forward to seeing more of your work.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
5 posted 2003-07-10 09:01 PM


Well thank ya you guys are too kind though =oÞ
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2003-07-10 09:09 PM


Welcome to Passions, Snowflake.  Please,
check your E-mail for a Special Greeting!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2003-07-10 09:13 PM


Welcome to the poetry forum
Sounds as if someone has put a spell on you.
Stick around, and enjoy.

anwaarhassan
Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 181
Menifee, CA
8 posted 2003-07-10 09:14 PM


Great poem...enjoyed the read.

Anwaar

Saunni
Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
9 posted 2003-07-10 09:22 PM


Welcome! This is very, very beautiful!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

Snowflake From Hell
Senior Member
since 2003-07-10
Posts 777
My own little Icey Oblivion
10 posted 2003-07-10 09:52 PM


Thank ya guys I appreciate all the compliments =o)
Janette
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since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843
Chicagoland for now
11 posted 2003-07-10 11:19 PM


Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh ... this is so dear.

Enjoyed

suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
12 posted 2003-07-11 12:01 PM


Longing for you in my arms.
Your company I miss very much,
Waiting patiently for your touch.
Enchanted by your gorgeous looks,
Can't find it in any fantasy books.
Glorified by your uniqueness,

I like this very much... and love your screen name! *S* Welcome to Passions! *S*

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