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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2003-07-10 07:54 PM

Moon colored leaves spin with illusions
autumn ghosts swim in golden showers,
they are animation for the still life
and break the spell of summer sedation.

They come along in premature deliverey or
perhaps in seasons that hid behind the forest deep,
until in hesitation my eyes - they do acknowledge,
that none is ever quite the way it seems.

As dreamless men that sit behind a desk job,
achieve fulfillment spouting their manure,
they dress up in a poet's fine attire
and spoonfeed hollow hope to hungry housewives.

But still I let illusions in to filter,
if only capturing some momentary bliss,
as comfort sought for storms that i have gathered,
rarely touching me likeThe Rainbow's unmatched kiss

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-11-2003 07:54 AM).]

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

1 posted 2003-07-10 11:39 PM

inkedgoddess - an unmatched kiss would never come from you...

BC

garysgirl

Member Laureate

since 2002-09-29

Posts 19237
Florida, USA

2 posted 2003-07-11 12:07 PM

But still I let illusions in to filter,
if only capturing a momentary dream,
seeking comfort in the storms i've gathered,
thou barely touching like The Rainbow's unmatched kiss

Michele, this is a beautiful poem.
I really do like it.

Hugs

Ethel

Blush
Member

since 2002-08-31

Posts 56
Ky

3 posted 2003-07-11 12:15 PM

Nicely done
I liked this one
I just posted my first one here today
Patchwork Quilts
Hope to see you drop by

Susan~

vlraynes
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-25

Posts 8229
Somewhere... out there...

4 posted 2003-07-11 12:17 PM

Beautifully expressed, Michele.
I enjoyed this.
Hugs,
~Vicky
"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

5 posted 2003-07-11 01:31 AM

Michele:

God . . . this is . .
AMEN

As dreamless men that sit behind a desk job,
achieve fulfillment spouting their manure,
they dress up in a poet's fine attire
and spoonfeed hollow hope to hungry housewives.

This is brilliant . . .

Yes . . .  I must find my rainbow again
too  *wink*
xxoo

ambrish
Member

since 2003-03-27

Posts 257
India

6 posted 2003-07-11 02:40 AM

a very beautifull poem indeed

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

7 posted 2003-07-11 07:46 AM

Bill, yes, you are quite perceptive.......

Ethel, thanks for all the words of support

blush, hello and welcome here, it is quite a
magical place to be, youll laugh, youll cry and youll find something here each blessed day

viraynes, a pleasure to see you

sue, glad you could find something here ;
are we worth anything but the pure joy
a rainbow brings?

ambrish, welcome too to this lovely place of blue

Cpat Hair

Member Patricius

since 2001-06-05

Posts 11793

8 posted 2003-07-11 08:39 AM

(chuckling).... pointed...and well said...

nicely done

bslicker

Member Elite

since 2000-12-04

Posts 2321
state of mind

9 posted 2003-07-11 09:08 AM

bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

10 posted 2003-07-11 09:12 AM

Good job here, Michele....

Wind

Member Elite

since 2002-10-12

Posts 2981

11 posted 2003-07-11 10:30 AM

This is a good one

If art is still inside, I feel it
-Aaron Lewes

Goodknight
Member Elite

since 2002-06-15

Posts 2386
Ohio, USA

12 posted 2003-07-11 11:33 AM

great poem - wow it really says so much - will be readingit again - thanks Paul

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

13 posted 2003-07-12 07:10 AM

cpat..glad i could evoke a chuckle, maybe next time a guffaw.......

bernie........first times a charm

sunshine....thank you, and thanks again

wind...thanks girl

paul.....thank you for stopping in

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

14 posted 2003-07-12 09:26 PM

Very well done, and thought provoking.
Sandra

littlewing
Member Rara Avis

since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

15 posted 2003-07-12 11:20 PM

Michele: indeed indeed
xxoo

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

16 posted 2003-07-12 11:32 PM

nicely done,,,
enjoyed....

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

dreambuilder
Member

since 2003-03-23

Posts 319
caddyshack

17 posted 2003-07-13 05:47 AM

what an amazing write
these lines especially caught me:

As dreamless men that sit behind a desk job,
achieve fulfillment spouting their manure,
they dress up in a poet's fine attire
and spoonfeed hollow hope to hungry housewives.

mice pretending to be Men
I'll bet you make them tuck tail & scurry off -
may you be blessed by a true Man - as a Lady should be

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

18 posted 2003-07-13 07:44 AM

thanks Sandra, good to see u........

Sue, thanks for the bump......

dreamer...glad u liked- and could
appreciate the lines you highlighted;
yes, the mice, the mice......squeak by

lady? thank you.....but this chick has too
much "moxie" to curtsie and smile once her claws come out......lol

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