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Paul Wilson
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0 posted 2003-07-10 07:11 PM



A Pledge Of Love
By Paul Wilson


Please let me look into your heart
so I may know you from within
Your true feelings to me impart
am I special or just a friend

We walked the road of loneliness
till fate allowed our paths too cross
Each day filled with happiness
into the ring…my hat I toss

Spending time together each day
we have fallen in love my dear
Tomorrow our vows we will say
our destiny is crystal clear

Our song of love plays in my mind
as clouds drift upon velvet sky
Together true love we did find
sharing tears of joy we now cry

The future holds so much for us
all life’s precious hopes plans and dreams
Sharing the gift of love and trust
with each other, chasing moon beams

Wedding rings exchanged between two
a symbol of the love we share
Pledge of love between me and you
spoken from the heart with a prayer


"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (07-10-2003 07:13 PM).]

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Martie
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1 posted 2003-07-10 07:15 PM


Paul......a beautiful love poem!!  Good to see you posting again.
anwaarhassan
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2 posted 2003-07-10 07:16 PM


Very romantic and beautiful...

Anwaar

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3 posted 2003-07-10 07:18 PM


Congratulations!
What a beautiful poem for a wonderous moment. All happiness, TD

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4 posted 2003-07-10 07:32 PM



So lovely, Paul.  Good to see you again..you've been missed.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

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5 posted 2003-07-10 07:47 PM


Congratulations!
What a wonderful event and I hope you'll be happy forever and ever.

A beautiful poem from the heart of a loving and kind man.

Hugs, Marti

Paul Wilson
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6 posted 2003-07-10 08:05 PM


Martie~~~ So glad you liked this. Thanks for the sweet reply. I returned to passions yesterday and it sure feels good to be back among such wonderful friends.I sure wish I was in your state and out of this Southern humidity...Paul

anwaar...Glad to share with you this poem.
Thanks for taking the time to read and reply...Paul

ThisDiamond...Thanks for the kind reply. Maybe I should explain, i'm not getting married, my wife wouldn't like in very much LOL unless we renew our vows.Take Care...Paul

Vicky~~~So glad to hear from you. Thanks very much for remembering me and for reading and replying.Glad to be back home and catching up on all the wonderful poems I've been missing...Paul

Marti~~~I'm sorry if I mis-lead you. I found my true love many years ago and I let her know everyday.Thank you so very much for caring and the kind reply.I sure have some reading to do to catch up for the past 3 months I was gone, and I look forward to reading you and others very often...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

[This message has been edited by Paul Wilson (07-10-2003 08:06 PM).]

Patricia
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7 posted 2003-07-10 08:18 PM


Paul, this is lovely...flow and words.  Great write.

Patricia

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8 posted 2003-07-10 08:22 PM


There you are! Where in the dickens have you been! Keeping busy and out of trouble, I trust! You've been missed around here, ya know!

Lovely poem from the pen of a lovely man!

Luvs 'n hugs,
Linda

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9 posted 2003-07-10 09:30 PM


Paul, this is perfect, and romantic, and all those other great things.
Sandra

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10 posted 2003-07-10 09:40 PM


Beautiful Poem Paul!
So good to read you here again!!
~Big Hugs..

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Bill Charles
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11 posted 2003-07-10 11:43 PM


Paul - nice to see you posting my friend, and a great poem for the first one in a while. I owe you an email, but I've been super busy... I'll get to it soon...

BC

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12 posted 2003-07-10 11:51 PM


Paul, it's so good to see you posting. I've been gone today, so I didn't see this earlier.
This is such a beautiful poem....and has such meaning. It could be put into a Hallmark Card, for sure.

I'm really looking forward to seeing you more often.
Am glad you're back, my friend. We've missed you.  
Heart hugs  
Ethel

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13 posted 2003-07-10 11:58 PM


Very nice...James
Paul Wilson
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14 posted 2003-07-11 06:17 AM


Patrica~~~ Thanks for the read and reply...Paul

Donna~~~ Here I am, It feels good to be back among friends. Thanks for your sweet reply. I have missed reading you and all the other great poets here. It will take me awhile too catch up on all the great poems written since i've been away.I would never get in trouble Donna unless talked into it LOL.
Again, thanks for taking time to read & reply...Paul

Sandra~~~Thats some might big and kind words you used in your reply. Thanks for letting me into your life for a little while...Paul

Nancy~~~Thank you dear friend for your kind words. It's nice too be home...Paul

Bill...Good to hear from you my friend. Don't work too hard.Thanks Bill for taking time to read and reply...Paul

Ethel~~~ A hallmark card HUH!!!
I'm glad to be back among friends Ethel and hope that this visit last a long time.
Thank you for your sweet words...Paul

James...Thanks for taking time to read and reply...Paul  

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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