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Open Poetry #27
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x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08
Posts 130
California, USA
0 posted 2003-07-10 05:37 PM


hot hate tears
down my cheaks
like liquid lies

as of late
the puddle of betrayal
that collects
beneath me
reflects,
eyes broken.
Witness of too many funerals
and lost dreams

My soul leaks integrity
...as memories of bud drops
and lleyo stops
offer relief.
Broken hopes
of a legit life

once a reason to walk away
from my desires
piping through my bones
to cease
has left me wanting
to return to the hustle
of back street shadows
chased by tequila shots

was i pretending
when i believed that faith
was enough...
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Jennis#1
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since 2003-07-08
Posts 112
IL, Usa
1 posted 2003-07-10 05:38 PM

Super job. It is a wonderful piece of work.
keep on posating more poems.
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