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Rare Beauty
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Rare Beauty |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
Rare Beauty I saw her again today, looking just as fine as ever. I wonder if he truly appreciates, a love he should cherish forever. I find myself spending more and more time, enjoying her combination of beauty and intelligence. As time goes, our friendship grows, more & more her having a man is losing its relevance. I know I shouldn’t have these thoughts, for someone who belongs to another. But the more we share, the more I know, I really don’t care about that brotha. I bite my tongue, because I don’t have a choice, I have to respect that she belongs to another. But I’m sure she can see what I’m unable to hide, this rare beauty has inspired this brotha. I’ve loved; I’ve lost, |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I enjoyed this one. You've worded it well, but the situation is definitely ticklish. I hope this is fiction, or trouble is brewing. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
It's the safest way to honor her, from a distance. Enjoyed the write, and the emotional constraints. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Ah, she knows ... yes she knows. But please know this, she must feel safe with you or else this "knowing" would make her run away. So you are definitely being a really wonderful friend to her, hope she appreciates you. |
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papabear Member
since 1999-09-17
Posts 102Atlanta, GA |
Pilgrimage I wish it were, but its actually something I've been through... I stayed strong, but it was sooooo hard... Midnitesun Thank you... you're right... the safest.. not easy... but the safest... Janette Yes, she has hinted that she know how I feel and we are still friends today... |
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