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Goldenrose
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since 2003-05-30
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0 posted 2003-07-10 11:35 AM


Surfacing from the deepest ocean of a dream, sweat pours from my body, my mind is calmed by the face of you in it.

Enchanted,delighted by you, i begin my day with a smile.
So deep is my love for you,it cannot be measured, it has no limit.

The Queen of your realm of love you are,my sweet vermilion Queen.
Take my heart, feel it beat, only one name is locked into its centre...yours.

Take me to thy breast,let me drown in thy sea of love.
Hold me forever, never let go, i long to lay just looking into your eyes for hours and hours.

The piano of our love,plays the sweetest, achingly beautiful tune, in perfect harmony.

Like a floating downy seed,slowly drifting in summer's hot sticky haze.
Our love floats in aimless, careless abandon, slowly.

My hands i do hold up to thy love and feel the warmth thy generate, from across the thousands of miles.

In your heart,in your arms, in your life i want to be always.
Sharing everything, the ups and downs, the laughter and the smiles.

My precious love.....

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2003-07-10 11:58 AM


enjoyed this emotion of love written...wishing you a great multitude of lovely kisses from your love...thank you for sharing.
gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA
2 posted 2003-07-10 12:32 PM


Beautiful as always.
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2003-07-10 01:16 PM


oh good! good to see you are still writing!
A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
4 posted 2003-07-10 04:21 PM


Precious love..and I know that name locked deep inside that loving poets heart!

I love how you take words from our conversations and make beautiful love poetry out of them!

xxxxx love the name locked inside thy heart,
A Romantic Heart

Jennis#1
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since 2003-07-08
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IL, Usa
5 posted 2003-07-10 04:46 PM


It is a wonderful piece of work.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
6 posted 2003-07-11 02:57 AM


My dear sweet love, this was so beautiful, I had to come back and read your words again to have you near me!

xxxx love your Vermilion Queen

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
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New York
7 posted 2003-07-11 04:24 AM


Lovely Phil . . . and I see the fair maiden
has arrived . . .
xxoo

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