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Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now

0 posted 2003-07-10 08:38 AM


“THIS PICTURE POSE”

I see tenderness fair with eyes of mine,
one to embrace of skin that’s fair,
silk to sooth with fingertips to caress,
shoulders soft, I would touch them bare…

Petals of a rose I give to you of grace,
from a heart that beats from deep within,
only to see one smile would be enough,
for sadness reigns of where I’ve been…

So I sit and dream thoughts of thoughts,
of lips to melt with desires that flow,
I speak of words to be with whispers soft,
for of you I gaze in this picture pose…
~~~~

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
scorpio
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1 posted 2003-07-10 08:47 AM


Very romantic write, Bill..

believe in what your heart feels...

Patricia
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2 posted 2003-07-10 08:48 AM


And with last word of this verse...I release a thousand sighs.  Oh Bill, this is so beautiful.  

Patricia

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-07-10 09:13 AM


Oh Bill...you're writing just keeps on getting better and better.
Beautiful and romantic.
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2003-07-10 09:19 AM


Bill,
If this don't get them nothing will, enjoyed

littlewing
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5 posted 2003-07-10 09:24 AM


Bill:

may she grace you soon and fall upon your embrace to break this pose of yours . . .
xxoo

Bonnie j
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6 posted 2003-07-10 09:30 AM


Lovely poem. I see many lines in this one that could lead to another poem.
Thanks for sharing.
Bon-Bon

Jennis#1
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7 posted 2003-07-10 09:33 AM


wonderful poem. It remindes me of taking pictures. I like the different view point. I hope to read more of your work.
Keep up the great work.

Nightshade
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just out of reach
8 posted 2003-07-10 10:18 AM


Beautiful my friend. hugs, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Soleil Noir
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9 posted 2003-07-10 10:33 AM



An eternal romantic...
much needed in this world
gone rife with strife

well done, Sir

QjQ
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10 posted 2003-07-10 10:57 AM


nice write,,,  enjoyed reading...

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


LeeJ
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11 posted 2003-07-10 11:03 AM


simply beautiful
Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-07-10 11:38 AM


"sadness reigns of where I've been..."

~ May your sadness give way to gladness.

Luvin' hugs,
EA

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13 posted 2003-07-10 12:12 PM


good write Bill

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

gemjop
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14 posted 2003-07-10 12:29 PM


Where would one find a kind hearted soul like you? Are you the one in a million? Ah lovely, lovely setiments Bill, she's a lucky lady.
passing shadows
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15 posted 2003-07-10 01:06 PM


beautiful writing once again
vandana
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16 posted 2003-07-10 02:14 PM


nice write
Ivy Rose
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17 posted 2003-07-10 07:17 PM


Bill...This is an amazing write!!! Shows the tender, thoughtful you. I love the images you paint...I can almost see this lady of grace smiling down at you. Wonderful writing, as usual. ***Ivy Rose
inkedgoddess
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18 posted 2003-07-10 07:31 PM


she sounds like a dream come true......do these women exist, i wonder

[This message has been edited by inkedgoddess (07-10-2003 07:31 PM).]

vlraynes
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19 posted 2003-07-10 07:41 PM



Beautiful, as always, Bill...such a romantic you are.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

NewEnglandlazurlu
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A Mountain Paradise
20 posted 2003-07-10 07:41 PM


BC, I loved each verse, line and word.
Petals of a rose I give to you of grace,
from a heart that beats from deep within,

Just fabulous!

I know I've told you a gazillion times, but you are definitely the master of romance.

Huggles, Marti

Paul Wilson
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21 posted 2003-07-10 08:09 PM


Bill...Your classic style. Enjoyed. Thanks for sharing...Paul

"To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you"

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