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LeeJ
Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296


0 posted 2003-07-10 08:00 AM


How foolish of me to think me a dupe
If it hadn’t been for all those things that
Left tears & ruined dreams…I might not have become
The woman…all those thoughts so foolishly missed

Now standing unshaken, transfixed…with two hands
In unison…motivation revolving and ready to try
Another moonbeam another moment in life…..
Countless moments later!

The sea enters on a lasting tide, just different debris
Within the smallness of time…postcards arrive
Inviting me to view the edge…so there I floated
With the ocean circling around me in a ring

Warm fusion alters form whispering a carriage of wings
Invading my dreams as visible as the light of morning
Where spaces intertwine…supporting rhyme to another day/time
The woman in me becomes a monument
Still listening to the wind sailing through the trees

Does it really matter how many dreams come true?
When its truth is what we seek…is what we reap?
Is what we knew…?
I’m breathing the brilliance of something unparalleled
Where transparency of words lay firmly unpacked and
Doesn’t come with a manual or a backpack

I’m holding friends with my own two hands
Those who stay when the rest of the world walks out
For we live for the times, when each one of their lives
Is less difficult…falling into the art of friends firm and consistent

A vast amount of diversity stands out…within the crescent moon
Most sacred powers of nature, symbolizes feminine bloom
Creating seasons within, tantalizing scents and reasons
For the blend of fragrances associated with the heart of magic
Simplicity is the ultimate complexity

I’m looking through life’s mirror witnessing beauteous ways
Believing in them, leading me on my lane…singing with all the musicians
Artists…realizing we’re happy with what we’ve started!!!!


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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
1 posted 2003-07-10 08:06 AM


LeeJ
"Simplicity is the ultimate complexity"
Enjoyed


Bonnie j
Senior Member
since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
2 posted 2003-07-10 09:55 AM


Keep them coming my friend. Look at the beauty you are sharing with us. The beauty of words is written within your very soul. They will never die and run and hide on the swirling wind of past yesterdays.
Sorrow will be swept on warm currents and sent out to sea and warm winds will bring you a glowing rainbow.
See Ya Your Lovin' Sis
Bon_Bon

QjQ
Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.
3 posted 2003-07-10 10:44 AM


very, very nicely written,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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