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RedStoneEB
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0 posted 2003-07-10 07:36 AM


Life? So meaningless
Out of place
Missing?
Empty shells
Walking on
This God forsaken
Plain of existents    

Souls searching
The wastelands
For signs
Signs of love
That will allow
Rejoining  
Of the two
As one

A whispered longing
To be set free
From all this
Hurt and misery

Desiring the need
Of blood
Running through
There souls
Bringing life
To their hearts
Causing them
To breathe
Life into this world again


© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
RedStoneEB
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1 posted 2003-07-10 04:40 PM


Why hasnt anyone replied isnt it good enough for anyone?

my mind is like a dream sometimes confusing

paladin
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2 posted 2003-07-10 09:22 PM


I write out of a need to put down my words.If other people like my words it is fine with me.If not then perhaps they do not see as I see.Do not stop writing.It is sometimes difficult to make a connection.

paladin

....a knight without armor

anwaarhassan
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since 2003-07-09
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Menifee, CA
3 posted 2003-07-10 09:27 PM


Hi Redstone,
Keep on writing and people will notice...I stopped writing once because a teacher said what I wrote was not good enough...It took me 17 years to start writing again...Hope you don't make the same mistake that I did...

Your poem is very powerful and expresses deep sorrow...

Anwaar

Saunni
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4 posted 2003-07-10 09:38 PM


I just signed on to this site for today but this is EVERY BIT worth the read! Excellent, excellent write here! I mean that!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

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