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Chameleon
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since 2002-08-07
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0 posted 2003-07-10 07:03 AM



Can you mend a broken heart?
What about if its been squeezed or torn apart?
I need a fix; I am ripe for refill.
Paste it and mould it back into shape.
My numbness although remains still.

Find me back in the waves again.
In moving motions of density and colour,
Hide me till I am repaired;
Till I feel I am again in a state where I am sane.

Drain the fluid drowning my heart, seeping through the cracks of its wound.
Give me a release, with what I can breathe.
Give me peace.
A release.
Adjusting to my scars.

© Copyright 2003 Nicholas Hall - All Rights Reserved
gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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1 posted 2003-07-10 01:09 PM


Nicholas...I'm feeling this completely. I'm ripe for refill too. Give me some peace of mind, or I want my money back!

keep em coming..

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2003-07-10 01:14 PM


love this!

I can relate well

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
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3 posted 2003-07-10 01:31 PM


Amazingly enough I really can relate to this and it's a good poem youu wrote.  Hope everything works out fine.

Sometimes you can't change what's going to happen but you can change how you percieve it.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-07-10 02:49 PM


sad
but it sounds as if
you are ready
for an adjustment

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