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Open Poetry #27
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LukeatNFFC
Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England
0 posted 2003-07-10 04:24 AM


A Description of the Feeling of Waking Up From
A Nightmare-  

Falling, Screaming,
Into the night,
Darkness prying,
Enveloping light.

Shouting, Crying,
Rereshing the Fright,
feel like I'm dying,
Please end this night.

Shadows around me,
Creeping and Crawling,
Tearing My Lungs Out,
Screaming and Bawling.
© Copyright 2003 Luke - All Rights Reserved
LukeatNFFC
Junior Member
since 2003-07-09
Posts 42
Nottingham, England
1 posted 2003-07-10 07:21 AM

Just Wondering if any1 has even viewed this yet...?
littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-07-10 09:30 AM

Well Luke, I would say you just about described it well up there indeed . . .
nice write, hoping you sleep sweeter
(btw I am an insomniac LOL)
xxoo
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