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Darkskyzgreydyz
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0 posted 2003-07-10 12:52 PM



Disillusioned echos of a shattered dream once thought of as existance
we cease to live our lives in fear that it will one day all disappear, clouds of grey chase me in my mind of disaray
terror fills my world as i realize i am me and no one else can understand why
rambling as i speak words no one understands but the voices in my head seem to make it clear to me that i need to shut up....................why?


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Gaia
1 posted 2003-07-10 01:02 AM


welcome to Passions

maybe those voices need a vacation
are you overworking them?

Sun of faith
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2 posted 2003-07-10 01:03 AM


awesome write, ive been there and it reaaly made me think, great write, i really felt it
paladin
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3 posted 2003-07-10 01:05 PM


Welcome to Passions.I enjoyed your first post.I am looking forward to reading more.Look for a special e-mail welcome.

paladin

....a knight without armor

Janette
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4 posted 2003-07-10 11:43 PM


Welcome.

For me I only fear the unknown.  

Interesting write here and I shall look for more of you in the future.

And please have a look around, get comfy and cozy with us.  I am sure there are lots of "reads" here that you will enjoy and naturally all poets love responses.  So please just jump right on in.

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