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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
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0 posted 2003-07-09 10:23 PM




only moments together in
time bring together

memory's remembered till

touch my heart ~ leave
memory's

moist my lips ~ with kisses
as you caress

slowly let your eyes reveal
my flesh

surrender your love as
captive of my heart

let our emotions entangle ~


A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


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inkedgoddess
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1 posted 2003-07-09 10:32 PM


entangled is a good place indeed
Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-07-09 11:15 PM


Tender--and very sensuous.

Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

LeeJ
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3 posted 2003-07-10 06:49 AM


this would be a lovely way for us all to live our lives together, open to the acceptance of everyone, who they are, what they believe in, supporting where they are going...we should care about the souls of others as well as our lovers...isn't that true love?  Anyway, those were the thoughts your poem evoked?  Thanks and have a great day.
HopeS
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4 posted 2003-07-10 06:59 AM


Most beautifully expressed
Hope

Patricia
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5 posted 2003-07-10 08:55 AM


Q-
This is lovely...very much enjoyed.

Patricia

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
6 posted 2003-07-10 09:20 AM


Very nicely written..
Much enjoyed the read this morn.
~Smiles & hugs, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2003-07-10 09:27 AM


QjQ
Hot stuff, enjoyed.

littlewing
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8 posted 2003-07-10 09:31 AM


Nice job Q - may this be your reality
xxoo

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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9 posted 2003-07-10 09:34 AM


Hi there Q. Good morning.
Your heart is filled
with sunshine today
to write such loving poetry.
Thanks for sharing
See Ya Bon-Bon

Jennis#1
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since 2003-07-08
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IL, Usa
10 posted 2003-07-10 09:35 AM


I liked it a lot.
keep on writting.

JilGirl
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since 2003-05-24
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11 posted 2003-07-10 05:42 PM


Delightful, romantic write,
no doubt from a very romantic
heart!
Enjoyed!

'Tiz feathers that make the bird -
Always remember to keep them fluffed
but, never, EVER ruffle them!

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22
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12 posted 2003-07-11 12:18 PM


Vibrant write!
Nice presentation, unique and creative.
Enjoyed. TD

timothysangel1973
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13 posted 2003-07-11 12:34 PM




Great write QjQ

Ivy Rose
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since 2001-12-29
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14 posted 2003-07-11 01:07 AM


QjQ...This is a striking poem. I really liked the format of this poem, as well as the the way you phrased this poem of love.

***Ivy Rose

passing shadows
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displaced
15 posted 2003-07-11 02:33 AM


wow! very hot!
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
16 posted 2003-07-11 03:09 AM


enjoyed thank you~ARH
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