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Into The Warm
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Into The Warm |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Into The Warm Can you feel me slip inside just a graze of hair on cheek to touch so much the wounded parts with dappled light from words impart to kiss the broken doubt so that the pieces fall and are pulled out by breeze I made with beating heart to still the ache that pulls apart I know the shoulder of this place its fragile keep is naked now the place is mine as well as yours and captures moments to insure the sound so close of sugared breath that melts then bends the will that built years of walls around the warm to keep the heat soft nestled safe now like a whisper to candle flame we blow out doubt to opening ------ repost for a special friend who needs to know they have a friend in me |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
This is as close to perfection as it could be....and what a wonderful way to say you're there.... Many quiet prayers will be added to this song of yours. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
nice write,,, enjoyed..... A voice of honesty |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
This has a cadence which is endearing and friendly. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful sweet Martie...very much enjoyed. ~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~ ~If you haven't heard the sunset, |
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ecrivan Member Elite
since 2001-12-10
Posts 3923my own state |
a pleasant read..much enjoyed  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No one would ever doubt the friendship candle you hold out... You have a treasure trove from which to read, and read again... you're a blessing to our new members, as well as us "oldies"...  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The warmth of your words literally radiates off the page...  Lovin' hugs, Linda |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Martie, you are such a loving and sincere person. It all comes through in this poem. I hope that it helps your friend who needs help right now. I know it did me.  Hugs  Ethel |
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Eromyna Member
since 2002-11-29
Posts 306Pheonix, AZ, USA |
You have a tantalizing style. I can't wait to read more. "I don't need to scream for you to deem me aggravation." |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Tears here...incredibly beautiful, sweet friend. |
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Soleil Noir Senior Member
since 2001-12-19
Posts 688USA |
We are all blessed in know you, Poet. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSisterOfThisHeart~ I'm just gonna take this one real personally~ You reach out with love ... and I, for one, would never doubt the sincerity of your friendship~ Love you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
I know the shoulder of this place its fragile keep is naked now the place is mine as well as yours and captures moments to insure the sound so close of sugared breath that melts then bends the will that built years of walls around the warm to keep the heat soft nestled safe absolutely beatiful....stunning write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
to touch so much the wounded parts with dappled light from words impart to kiss the broken doubt so that the pieces fall and are pulled out by breeze I made with beating heart to still the ache that pulls apart So much grace and beauty... so much caring. *S* Your friend is fortunate to have you. *S* |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awwww  this is so beautiful! Lucky friend. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie Your repost as always is a delight to read. |
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mirror man Senior Member
since 2001-01-08
Posts 814 |
Much enjoyed also. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
powerful poetry Martie - you write miracles here - Paul |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Martie, my friend...this is beautiful, as is your heart. No one could ever doubt a friend as true as you. Love and hugs, ~Vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
I needed this, thank you, sweet friend.  |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Lovely write here ... yes just lovely. Enjoyed |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
UP to the TOP!  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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