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Open Poetry #27

First Love

anwaarhassan
Member

since 2003-07-09

Posts 181
Menifee, CA

0 posted 2003-07-09 09:05 PM

First Love

Love-lorn eyes locked in amity,
Silent thoughts, blissful harmony;
Holding hands, face to face,
A tender kiss, a loving embrace.
Time was precious for you and me
We were in love and young and free.

But one instant of calamity
Brought an end to all serenity;
Silent lips gave no reason why,
Cold eyes bid a chilling goodbye.
Time stood still when you walked away
A shattered life you left that day

But life itself did not end,
A broken soul needs time to mend
And open wounds from ease refrain,
Till healing scars soothe the pain,
Time has passed and done its part
Why does love still linger with a broken heart?

[This message has been edited by anwaarhassan (07-11-2003 09:51 AM).]

Poe_Pot_Pie
Member

since 2003-06-01

Posts 107
Canada

1 posted 2003-07-09 09:07 PM

Deep man, very deep. I thought it was big picture thinking.

My cousin is really sad that no one replied to "Candle Party", could you make her happy?

Thanks

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

2 posted 2003-07-09 11:12 PM

I enjoyed this one. Sometimes it takes longer than we think it will, but time will eventually heal the hurt.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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