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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-09 08:34 PM





You could never kiss me soft enough
now
to melt down all you have cemented still.

There will never be such fondness in
memory
since your silence passed overhead like death.



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littlewing
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1 posted 2003-07-09 08:36 PM


Ok - this one got to me  

God gem . . .
xxoo

gemjop
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2 posted 2003-07-09 08:42 PM


Sue, i'm just venting. feeling wretched. don't want a pretty, kind soul like you to have ever felt this, but, i'm sure you have. Thanks for being here.
Patricia
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3 posted 2003-07-09 09:19 PM


Oh dang, Gemjop...this is incredible.  I could quote the whole verse here.  This is excellent!  I can not even begin to tell you how much this one touched me...'cause I know it so well!

Patricia

Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
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With my darkling
4 posted 2003-07-09 09:28 PM


"shivers" a good write, chilled me.

Jason

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2003-07-09 09:30 PM


gem...you are one of my favs..i never miss a poem of yours...h
Aenimal
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6 posted 2003-07-09 09:39 PM


Damn Gem, this is why we love your writing..always FEEL them
Wind
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7 posted 2003-07-09 09:48 PM


I'm shivering so much, people are begining to stare.

At sunset I've won or lost.
At sunrise, I'm out again
-Ray Bradbury

garysgirl
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8 posted 2003-07-09 11:29 PM


Oh Gemma, I hate it that you're feeling this way. But, I'm really glad that you're doing what you said in your reply.....the "venting" part. That's good, little lady. It helps to get it out so that you can move on....and you will. Soon you will be flying really high again....like a bird....free and happy again.

Don't forget that you have friends always ready to lend support for whatever you need. Okay?

Heart hugs          
Ethel Mae

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