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I Will Wait For You
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I Will Wait For You |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Take me up or down I feel the time is right for us Will you come and take me I will wait for you You know The door is right open for you To come in and take me You don't know How I feel I won't stop thinking about you Untill you come and take me with you Untill then I will wait for you This feelings so strong they are never wrong My life ain't worth living without you If I can't be with you I can't stop thinking about you I can't stop loving you And if I try to stop I don't know what will I do If you want to say goodbye And leave me behind This life of mine will be dull Without you [This message has been edited by vandana (07-09-2003 08:34 PM).] |
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gemjop Member Elite
since 2002-11-18
Posts 2587Pencilveinia, USA |
some people, you just know you're meant to love. and you cant stop wanting to carry on loving them! lovely words as usual Vandana. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Vandana? Everytime I read you I see your spirit, so pure and true--you are always a sweet treat of reading. Thank you lovely. I DID and continue to, enjoy.   |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Vandana, I really liked this. Thanks for sharing it with us.  Hugs, my friend  Ethel |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wonderful  |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
very good write bernie A smile a day keeps the world in smile's. |
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Janette
since 2001-07-20
Posts 2843Chicagoland for now |
Take me take me take me Sheesh, I hope the guy gets it. But then sometimes men are hard of hearing ... go figure. Enjoyed. |
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Tim Senior Member
since 1999-06-08
Posts 1794 |
very nice Vandana, I liked your poem. |
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