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Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow

0 posted 2003-07-15 12:57 PM


Cough drop disolve.
A firm hand
resolves.
A warm hand
clutches,
a sad song touches.

So far,
memory lacks the
adequacy to
complete me.

Moondust scatters
above the air that
we breathe.
Our lips greet,
craving..
I ache for
the exclusive love.

A forsaken heart
shivers.
Light halts it's speed
to sound.
And a flower
grows
as we get
to know
eachother.



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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-15 02:21 AM


wonderful! I gotta keep this one!
vlraynes
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2 posted 2003-07-15 02:23 AM



Ah yes...I like this one...

"And a flower
grows
as we get
to know
eachother."

What a lovely thought.
Hugs,
~Vicky

"...until you have read the verse on his heart,
you have not truly met the poet.
~vlraynes

Temptress
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3 posted 2003-07-15 11:49 AM


THIS PART...

"So far,
memory lacks the
adequacy to
complete me."

I LOVE...

back to the top with you

Late at night you'll come crawling back
Just to steal a piece of me

"Default"

JaiOfHeaven
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4 posted 2003-07-16 11:34 PM


thank you for continuously being you K'...

Jai

anwaarhassan
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5 posted 2003-07-17 12:09 PM


Very poetic and beautifully written...enjoyed reading this.

Anwaar

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6 posted 2003-07-17 12:22 PM


@$^#%$* amazing...nuf said
JamesMichael
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7 posted 2003-07-21 03:46 PM


May the flowers keep growing...James
gemjop
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8 posted 2003-07-22 10:47 AM


I ache for
the exclusive love.


damn.

Instant karma's gonna get you.

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2003-07-22 10:57 AM


Kaoru
Well done, enjoyed the read.

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