Super Sydney - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

0 posted 2003-07-09 05:17 PM

Here is a poem that I have written to a very special girl named Sydney Jordan R.

whenever Sydney comes around
a smile comes to my face
she can brighten up any day
with the things she says
she is only one year old
although she sometimes acts like thirty
she has a heart of gold
and the brain of a twelve year old
she is so smart
and so cute
with her fiery brown hair
I love her to death
she's my "super toddler"
and she will be
until the end
Copyright © 2003,Jenn

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

1 posted 2003-07-09 05:26 PM

Gotta love her, just as ya gotta love this bright piece.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind. Unknown

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

2 posted 2003-07-09 05:31 PM

Hi,

Thanks for responding to my poem. It means a lot to me when people tell me that they like my work. Agian thanks for reading this poem.
I have written another poem in this forum it is called overwhelining pain.

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

3 posted 2003-07-10 05:42 PM

Does any one have anything to say?

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

4 posted 2003-07-12 09:35 AM

is there anyone else who would like to have a say about this poem???????????????

*looks for people while staring off into space*

spritrider87
Member

since 2003-05-31

Posts 294
NH

5 posted 2003-07-12 04:57 PM

hey i like this it is a really touching poem.

"i am in troble but no one knows it if you can figure out my messages then help me.
at the end of the rope taking my last breath "

QjQ
Member Elite

since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

6 posted 2003-07-12 08:16 PM

terrific,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2003-07-12 08:37 PM

Jennis - please read your E-mail. I'm waiting for a response. Thank you.

Jennis#1
Member

since 2003-07-08

Posts 112
IL, Usa

8 posted 2003-07-13 11:06 AM

Hi,

Thanks for your wonderful repsonses.
It means so much when people will thank me for writting a poem.

agian thanks for responding.

Jenn

Jordyn05
Member

since 2003-07-17

Posts 62

9 posted 2003-07-30 09:07 PM

Jenn agian another wonderful piece of work.
It touched my heart and soul. It made me cry.
Your so lucky to have a very special friend named Sydney.

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.