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gemjop
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0 posted 2003-07-09 04:34 PM



Ball thoughts into fist
thrash at myself again

I tire

Why do you never?

Fitful sleeper
on fresh page of bed

I never tire

Why wont you calm me?

Black lace wasted lover
on messy dulled bruise

My spine intact

Suprised you're still standing?

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Ericc
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1 posted 2003-07-09 04:36 PM


Powerful words...as always.
Eric

Earth Angel
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2 posted 2003-07-09 04:40 PM


"A fitful sleeper on fresh page of bed."--How do you come up with these creative, inovative, and unique lines?!? You is one talented little missy!


EA

Wind
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3 posted 2003-07-09 05:33 PM


My little gumdrop stopped in and I missed her. But i found her delicious poem. Shivers gem, shivers

PS, if I'm the peanut, which one are you?

no..i checked login. I know you're there girl.


I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

[This message has been edited by Wind (07-09-2003 05:36 PM).]

gemjop
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4 posted 2003-07-09 05:39 PM


I'm gumdrop now? gem drop, gumdrop, i don't mind. i'm here. always here. i like cashew nuts. hey , i just replied to one of yours..spooooky.
Wind
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5 posted 2003-07-09 05:49 PM


spookey? you mean like every other day this happens
potato potato,
tomato tomoto,
Gemjop, gem drop, gumdrop

they look the same

I said I'm going to buy a gun and start a war,
If you can tell me something worth fighting for
-coldplay

Kaoru
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where the wild flowers grow
6 posted 2003-07-09 07:11 PM


Wonderful, wonderful! Really loved this one,
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-07-09 07:56 PM


gem:

some days I am surprised I
wake up at all
lol

seriously . . .

spine intact - I have no idea how
xxoo

QjQ
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8 posted 2003-07-09 08:05 PM


nice write,,,,

A voice of honesty
   is treasured
more than voices
   of flattery
      QjQ


inkedgoddess
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9 posted 2003-07-09 09:53 PM


you speak from strength in your words, always

Aenimal
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the ass-end of space
10 posted 2003-07-09 10:05 PM


Bloooooody brilliant
garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-07-09 10:19 PM


Hey Gemmagirl  
I love this line    

Ball thoughts into fist
thrash at myself again


and this.....

Black lace wasted lover
on messy dulled bruise


You really are a talent, little lady.  

Hugs to you  
Ethel Mae


Wind
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12 posted 2003-07-09 10:25 PM


cheer up gumdrop,
I wrote a little something for you,
just because you're feeling blue.
It's not a shiver, but it'll do
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At sunset I've won or lost.
At sunrise, I'm out again
-Ray Bradbury

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