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bslicker
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0 posted 2003-07-09 04:05 PM


Angel side-by-side


there was this person
i met a long time ago
did not know at the time that the steps
being made was her’s and not mine
until she was gone
finding out that she was my angel
brought into my terrible life
trying to set me on the path of right
not knowing that this was my angel
until it was to late
now she is gone
foot steps are mine now
wishing she would come back
for I might never have another angel
if I do I will let her know
that I do not need to be carried
on the ground I am solid
with my soles touching the dirt
with my angel’s imprints next to mine
walking life together
side-by-side
.
.
.
bernie




A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (07-09-2003 11:48 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-07-09 04:10 PM


Sometimes we don't appreciate things--or people--until they are gone.

May another angel come your way...

Warm hugs,
EA

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2 posted 2003-07-09 04:12 PM


I'm sure another angel with come along. They are never far from our side.

Hugs, Marti

Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts.  A.Einstein

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3 posted 2003-07-09 08:26 PM


Great poem anout Angels.
I hope that you will visit my posts in this forum. They are called Super Sydney and Overwhelming pain.

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4 posted 2003-07-10 12:42 PM


Hey Bernie  
Good to see you here!! I liked this poem, even if it was sad. I especially liked this part....
on the ground I am solid
with my soles touching the dirt
with my angel’s imprints next to mine
walking life together
side-by-side


There will be another angel come along. Just wait and see.  
Hugs  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-07-10 12:46 PM


Awwwww...this was a beautiful poem, but kinna sad too!

You will find your angel someday, she's out there looking for you...and one day ya'll will find each other!

Great write!


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6 posted 2003-07-10 12:23 PM


EA thanks, and your correct, and maybe someday.

Marti thanks for the hugs, one will someday, but never like the one i had, that i didn't know i had till to late.

Jennis thanks, and yes will read.

Ethel, what can i say you are always so kind, and ok waiting.

Tim, thanks like i told Ethel,, waiting,,waiting, waiting....

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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7 posted 2003-07-10 12:28 PM


Opps forgot to give H a special thanks for helping me correct the couple errors i had in this.

Thanks H

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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8 posted 2003-07-10 01:02 PM


Great write Bernie!
~Hugs~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

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9 posted 2003-07-10 01:14 PM


Thank you Enchantress

Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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10 posted 2003-07-11 03:17 AM


Angels are real, and sometimes when they disappear, it is then we know we have been touched by an angel...some of love, some of kindness...and comfort...

Blessed is the man who sees her there before its too late!

Thanks for your wisdom!

ARH

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11 posted 2003-07-14 04:41 PM


enjoyed
bslicker
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12 posted 2003-07-15 11:35 AM


thank you ARH and vandana for reading....

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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