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Jason Lyle
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With my darkling

0 posted 2003-07-09 03:36 PM


Have you got
just a minute?
Just a second
to lend your perspective

to let me borrow your experience

so I can figure out
the exact moment

That I dropped

the ball?

[This message has been edited by Jason Lyle (07-09-2003 08:51 PM).]

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EagleScorpion
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1 posted 2003-07-09 03:38 PM


hehe

this brings to mind the many times ive lost stuff and tried to retrace my steps.. never a fun thing..

good luck finding the ball again

Pilgrimage
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2 posted 2003-07-09 03:40 PM


Short and sweet! I like this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Nightshade
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just out of reach
3 posted 2003-07-09 03:49 PM


This is great Jason!! I love this. Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-07-09 03:51 PM


OK, but it's probably gonna take half an hour!
just kidding, LOL

you woke me up from my nap

wild irish
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5 posted 2003-07-09 03:54 PM


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littlewing
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6 posted 2003-07-09 08:17 PM


jason:

whoever lends a hand helping you there
please have them look for me too
Mine is far far into the deep woods

*smiling*

your shining!
xxoo

gemjop
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7 posted 2003-07-10 01:12 PM


sigh, when they tell you, get them to tell me. great thoughts Jason.
passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-07-10 01:13 PM


AWESOME!
Janette
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9 posted 2003-07-10 11:37 PM


Hahahahha ... this was choice!

But I wish to know ... did they give you a complete reply?

Enjoyed

garysgirl
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10 posted 2003-07-11 12:12 PM


Jason, this is a neat poem. I like it.
Hugs  
Ethel

timothysangel1973
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11 posted 2003-07-11 12:36 PM


Hey...after they get done helping you Jason...can you send them my way?

Wonderful write!!!

Earth Angel
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12 posted 2003-07-11 12:36 PM


Well, if you did drop the ball, you're one of the few men I know who would admit to it!

Warm hugs,
EA

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