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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2003-07-09 07:40 AM


sorry i havent posted for a while ive been busy with work well heres a new poem i wrote hope you enjoy the read thanks ___________________________________________________
~ Dreams ~

You wonder through
My inner thoughts
You touch my soul
Relighting the flames
That brings
My heart back to life

Sudden feelings rush
To surfaces
Hit again by the
Happiness
That comes from
Loving you

My eyes open
See the world anew
Awoken by your touch
Sweet tender lips
Press against mine

You fade from my arms
A mere dream
Holding only
The inner screams

Wonder if
Ill ever find you
In thoughts only
You seem to remain

One day my soul
Will join yours
In the forests
I dream inside

Where you walk
You skin so
Pure and soft
Long hair flowing
In the wind

Footsteps gently
On the forests floors
Quietly tip-toeing
To the place
Where I will soon
Arrive

Taking my place
Next to you
Angels flying
Overhead

Knowing its all
A dream
Rather then awaken
I sleep on
Forever till my doom


© Copyright 2003 Lee Hepworth - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2003-07-09 09:07 AM


This is very beautiful and romantic .... you have a special talent for dream landscapes. ... and I enjoy greatly!
Love, Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215
Realms of Light
2 posted 2003-07-09 09:34 AM


Ah, there you are! I was wondering where you had disappeared to! Well, this surreal and romantic poem was worth the wait!

~ May your reality become a reflection of your dreams!

Sweet dreams!
Luvs 'n hugs,
EA

garysgirl
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since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237
Florida, USA
3 posted 2003-07-09 09:40 AM


Hi, Lee!!  
I've missed you around here, too.
I sure did enjoy this poem. It's very romantic...
my favorite kind of poetry.  

"If I know there's no possible way I can change something....I push it to the back room
in my mind & slam the door on it." Gary~  Heart hugs, Ethel

Midnitesun
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Gaia
4 posted 2003-07-09 12:12 PM


hey there dreamer! good to know you are still around, in dreamland and in poetryland
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