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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2003-07-09 07:33 AM


She Touched Me

She touched me where my skin is thin
In spirit of the courtship din
And took me by my eyes in stare
And by the fire of her dare

And I in hopeless lassitude
Succumbed beneath an attitude
Laid my shield upon the ground
And knelt one knee to her astound.

To me she was an angel sent
A spewing of desires vent
And to this day I can’t believe
This miracle of conceive

And thought I am a mix of stew
And knew that it was not my coup
Yet I thank this bend of wend
And will until my very end.

If this could happen to this frog
I say you stay within the bog.



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Goldenrose
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1 posted 2003-07-09 08:03 AM


Very good writing....

Goldenrose.

scorpio
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2 posted 2003-07-09 08:43 AM


She loves you too, Sy...very romantic..
Jason Lyle
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3 posted 2003-07-09 08:44 AM


yes, very romantic...what is a wend?


Jason

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4 posted 2003-07-09 08:49 AM



What a grand smile
you gifted me this morning,
Sy...

started my day off just right...

Thank you.


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5 posted 2003-07-09 08:54 AM


Sy, this is so perfectly charming..
Lovely lovely write this morn!
And oh so romantic!!
~Morning hugs & tea, Nancy~

~If you haven't heard the sunset,
   you haven't been listening.~

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2003-07-09 08:55 AM


Goldenrose
Thank you for the read and nice reply

scorpio
My thanks for your indulgence.

Jason,
Wend is to travel ones way.

Sunshine
Always happy to make you smile. LOL

[This message has been edited by Sunshine (07-09-2003 09:19 AM).]

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7 posted 2003-07-09 08:56 AM


Good morning, Mr. T-Man!

There'd be no smog in a bog where a princely frog such as yourself would dwell. The air would be fresh and sweet and a lovely place for an angel to come and be by your illustrious side!

May you be so touched often!

Have a glorious day!

EA

Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 2003-07-09 08:57 AM


Nancy,
Be right there, hugs and

Janet Marie
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9 posted 2003-07-09 08:59 AM


She Touched Me

She touched me where my skin is thin
In spirit of the courtship din
And took me by my eyes in stare
And by the fire of her dare

And I in hopeless lassitude
Succumbed beneath an attitude
Laid my shield upon the ground
And knelt one knee to her astound.

To me she was an angel sent
A spewing of desires vent
And to this day I can’t believe
This miracle of conceive
===============================

Youre no frog and Isabel is no fool ...
she knew a dragon divine when she saw one.
Very cool poem Stinky...how could she resist you and Randy...it just cant be done.


Seymour Tabin
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10 posted 2003-07-09 09:00 AM


Earth Angel
ROTF, thank you my dear.

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2003-07-09 09:05 AM


JM,
There is a multitude and a mountain of love and you are on the top.
WWRS

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12 posted 2003-07-09 09:50 AM


Seymour, ooh, a deliciously soft write this morning! Another for the growing "Seymour" section of my library. Dutch apple tarts to-day! Yummy! hugs to you, Chris

"Said you'd give me light...
...but you never told me about the fire."

~Stevie Nicks~  
      

    

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13 posted 2003-07-09 09:54 AM


She touched me where my skin is thin
In spirit of the courtship din
And took me by my eyes in stare
And by the fire of her dare


So very romantic, Seymour. I much enjoyed
reading, as I always do.  
Thank you,  
Hugs  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (07-09-2003 09:54 AM).]

Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2003-07-09 10:13 AM


Chris,
and hugs back.

Ethel
Thank you dear,

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15 posted 2003-07-09 01:21 PM


Laid my shield upon the ground
And knelt one knee to her astound


Quite a gallant write. Liked it.
Melton

Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2003-07-09 01:32 PM


Melton
Thank you for the read and reply.

NewEnglandlazurlu
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17 posted 2003-07-09 05:11 PM


Ahhhh Sy, how you do make me smile each day!

Luvs and Grins, Marti

Kethry
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18 posted 2003-07-09 05:23 PM


Sy,
are you saying you are THIN skinned, all these years I thought the oodles of praise bounced off because you were THICK skinned and now you tell me it's the reverse. What a miraculous world we live in.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Seymour Tabin
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19 posted 2003-07-09 05:54 PM


Marti,
That's my mission to make people smile.

Kethry,
Aint that the truth.




Martie
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20 posted 2003-07-09 05:54 PM


Sy...A frog in a bog is safer and smarter than a toad on the road.  Loved your poem!  
Seymour Tabin
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21 posted 2003-07-09 05:56 PM


Martie
You got that right.

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22 posted 2003-07-09 08:59 PM


Isabel is one smart lady... she knew a keeper when she found you! *S*

I love this, Seymour... love you, too. *S*

Seymour Tabin
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23 posted 2003-07-09 10:40 PM


suthern
Love you too sweet.

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