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x8x_bigmike
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since 2003-07-08
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0 posted 2003-07-09 04:06 AM



in the past my
memories most precious:

stolen moments in haste
like biting into ripe plums
i cant quench my thirst
for the sweet nectar
despite the painfull seeds of stolen summers

at 6
kickin' it
straight pimpin
in my big bird chair

i want to go back to the days
where i welcomed the rain
dripping down my
smiling face
looking for puddles

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-07-09 04:07 AM


I want to go back too!

nice write, thanks for the memories

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17
Posts 280
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2 posted 2003-07-10 01:36 PM


I'd rather like to go back to when I was little too but we can't so I guess we may as well look ahead, even if it is with trepidation.

Sometimes you can't change what's going to happen but you can change how you percieve it.

Midnitesun
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Gaia
3 posted 2003-07-10 04:20 PM


next time it rains, go trippin through some puddles
it's OK, I still do it, and I am ancient!

Jennis#1
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IL, Usa
4 posted 2003-07-10 04:55 PM


super job. keep on posting.
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